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Bleach里最最喜歡小白啦～～^_^喜歡他，喜歡他的倔強(qiáng)，喜歡他的青澀，喜歡他的機(jī)智，喜歡他的勇敢，喜歡他的別扭，喜歡他被亂菊欺負(fù)時(shí)的無奈，喜歡他被浮竹摸頭時(shí)的冷汗，喜歡他被一護(hù)叫“冬獅郎”時(shí)的惱怒。可是他那么堅(jiān)強(qiáng)啊，我只能看見他落寞的背影……小白，我這么喜歡你，是不是可以叫做“愛”了？小白，如果我叫你一聲“日番谷”，哈，你一定又會(huì)惱怒的叫：“叫我‘日番谷隊(duì)長(zhǎng)’！！！”呵呵，小白，請(qǐng)一定要幸福哦！

very good! looking forward for your another renew.

呵呵,JJ真好,一會(huì)來就更新了~~~~加油哦~~~~粉好看滴說~~~~~加油加油加油~~~更新更新更新~~

哇，剛說速度快，就在我寫評(píng)論的時(shí)候又多出一章，呵呵。作者回復(fù)：謝謝您的評(píng)論，我不光寫得快，倒騰的也快，我每寫一萬字反攻五千字，結(jié)果寫在底本存了大概十萬字了，而且都是報(bào)廢稿，因?yàn)榍楣?jié)一樣的。我真是郁悶，為什么一定要限字?jǐn)?shù)呢？我是個(gè)超級(jí)八股的家伙，給我限個(gè)字?jǐn)?shù)救老想湊字。現(xiàn)在我的矛盾是后面的內(nèi)涵在前面已經(jīng)缺少鋪墊，希望大家看的時(shí)候多多排磚，我一定虛心接受。謝謝！好感動(dòng)，有人給我留言我就特興奮！

哥們兒……我喜歡這段話：一直向往這樣一種生活：一片竹林，一池流水，一張古琴，一世悠閑。有詩與書的雅致，有琴與劍的和諧。有漫山遍野的櫻花爛漫，有風(fēng)清云淡的春光明媚。做個(gè)隱士是我不變的諾言。 有意思……

救命啊~~我想買你的實(shí)體書~~找遍我的城區(qū)都找不到啊~~~究竟哪里有賣啊？我寧可你在這里開V都不要找得這么辛苦啊~~郁悶~~

哎呀，不行了額，寫的太好看了，我喜歡這樣的結(jié)局，喜歡包子的冷淡，小顧的癡心一片，這是我看過的最好看的顧戚文了，要是和戚顧比的話，在我心中也差不多和邊荒是一個(gè)層次了~哎。。。大大，我太喜歡你了，你的卿景到底啥時(shí)候?qū)懓　！！Ｖ仫w難道寫不完了？

殺。。。殺。。。殺。。。=。=#偶現(xiàn)在在寢室看這個(gè)。。。啊哦~~！

嗚,怎么不更新啊,被拋棄叻,好可憐啊,雪啊血啊,你被拋棄叻11111111

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